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How can one describe the bounds of our love?
When it runs deeper than the ocean blue,
Soars higher than a jay can fly above,
And reaches further than the eye can view.

It started with a glance across a room.
Longing looks and soft spoken words to start,
With a first kiss that brought feelings to bloom,
These lovers could no longer be apart.

This love has had its share of disarray,
But through these tests their love grew stronger still.
Sharing intimate moments every day,
Neither of them can seem to get their fill.

Through all the times, both rough and joyful shared;
A love like this can never be compared.
:icongamblerschoice:

Author's Comments

I wrote this for someone special.

This is my first attempt at something like this, so feedback would be much appreciated!

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:iconmarpo3:
Lord knows, I know little about critiquing poetry, but I do recognize words that touch my heart. And yours do! :hug:

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"If you can't be kind, at least have the decency to be vague"



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:icongamblerschoice:
Thank you! I appreciate the comment! :cuddle: I had almost given up hope on getting any comments...

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A life lived in fear is a life half lived.

Please stop by my :gallery:
:iconmarpo3:
You're quite welcome... Through the years I've learned, it's not so much what others
think about the words I write... it's the liberating and subsequent healing effect
those words have on my own soul. :hug:

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"If you can't be kind, at least have the decency to be vague"



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